Talk:Arrian Amir-Rafiei
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Please put it in third person. Thanks :D ---BenzyneTalk Page 15:51, 3 February 2010 (EST)
Ok IMA do that right now... IronyFail 19:58, 04 February 2010 (EST)
Could you check it for me Ben? I can't tell if it sounds odd or not... IronyFail 20:02, 04 February 2010 (EST)
- Haha, it reads as though Bryce wrote it. Nicely done ;)
- Thanks, I did it in 5 minutes so its bound to sound terrible. One day when I have time I will probably update it to be just as good as your page (Very Nice work by the way) IronyFail 15:29, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Okay I fixed it and now it looks clean and doesn't sound as Samuel said, "Like Bryce wrote it" IronyFail 18:51, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Thanks, I did it in 5 minutes so its bound to sound terrible. One day when I have time I will probably update it to be just as good as your page (Very Nice work by the way) IronyFail 15:29, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Haha, it reads as though Bryce wrote it. Nicely done ;)
I HAVE BEEN EDITING THIS WIKI ALL DAY, IT DOESN'T END. IM GOING TO BE DREAMING ABOUT EDITING WIKI PAGES TONIGHT! This is Arrian, signing off after a very, very long day. IronyFail 23:21, 6 February 2010 (EST)
