Talk:Arrian Amir-Rafiei
Please put it in third person. Thanks :D ---BenzyneTalk Page 15:51, 3 February 2010 (EST)
Ok IMA do that right now... IronyFail 19:58, 04 February 2010 (EST)
Could you check it for me Ben? I can't tell if it sounds odd or not... IronyFail 20:02, 04 February 2010 (EST)
- Haha, it reads as though Bryce wrote it. Nicely done ;)
- Thanks, I did it in 5 minutes so its bound to sound terrible. One day when I have time I will probably update it to be just as good as your page (Very Nice work by the way) IronyFail 15:29, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Okay I fixed it and now it looks clean and doesn't sound as Samuel said, "Like Bryce wrote it" IronyFail 18:51, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Thanks, I did it in 5 minutes so its bound to sound terrible. One day when I have time I will probably update it to be just as good as your page (Very Nice work by the way) IronyFail 15:29, 06 February 2010 (EST)
- Haha, it reads as though Bryce wrote it. Nicely done ;)
I HAVE BEEN EDITING THIS WIKI ALL DAY, IT DOESN'T END. IM GOING TO BE DREAMING ABOUT EDITING WIKI PAGES TONIGHT! This is Arrian, signing off after a very, very long day. IronyFail 23:21, 6 February 2010 (EST)
Racism
The phrase "Arrian is a mix of Canadian and Iranian and draws well rounded qualities from both of these races." coupled with your callsign is really somewhat questionable. I'm not sure it's adviseable to include this sort of thing on an official Wiki. I'm not necessarily telling you to remove it, I don't want to dictate what goes on your member page, but it's best for us to appear as professional as possible everywhere on this website. - Darth Wombat 16:01, 21 February 2010 (EST)